MOD's Observations/suggestions
Greetings, Thank you for being a part steemit challenge season 24, we present your assessment

I am telling you many mistakes, my friend, you have shared a very beautiful story here. First, you presented the story in such a beautiful way that your story was enough to attract people to read the story to the end or to pay attention. Also, you started the story with a love story in which a couple, after loving each other for a few years, decided to get married and they did not make a big mistake in deciding to get married.Rather, they made the right decision when they were young, and as a result of that decision, they have been living together under the same roof for many years and have children. It is very good that any relationship or relationship between a couple survives and if there is equality of love, trust, and understanding, then it is definitely good. Whether it is a story or real life, it is definitely good to hear or see.

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