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RE: Strengths and weaknesses of innate and adaptive immunity – Is one better than the other?

in #steemstem5 years ago

May I begin by suggesting humbly that your English teacher would be proud of you? That is a very well constructed essay🌟 And I do love the science here-- a laudable (in my opinion) decision not to oversimplify.

It's hard to write a piece that is accessible to the lay audience and of interest to specialists. Seems to me you've managed that.

I enjoyed your essay and will return to it. This essay creates a clearer road map to the immune response than some of the jargon-laden material available on the Internet. Thank you!

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Thank you, I think my English and my German teacher would be proud, as the German teacher taught me how to write essays and the English teacher how to speak English :P

I didn't really aim for a lay audience here as it was for my Fundamental Immunology course, but as it is fundamental immunology and not advanced (don't have to write an essay for that, only take an exam), it should still be somewhat accessible.

Glad you're enjoying it!