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RE: The Mausoleum Part 4 - with a quick review for the earlier part of the story
The way of listing events and selected words is very beautiful
The story gave suspense.
This story reminds me of my brother Omar.
Two years older than me
He died of liver cancer
He is 10 years old
I do not hide it between my eyes
Although the time passed fold
I remember when we were playing and we were young
I was hit in the stomach
His stomach is bloated because of cancer
He complained me to my mother
And she said to me, I leave your brother
That he was sick
Do not hit him, you have to protect him
It did not take long
Until he died in hospital
I really do not understand how this reminds you of your brother. Please explain.
so sorry for your loss. :(
In the first part when Victoria's husband died
And her astonishment at his death
As soon as I hear death, my brother comes to you
Until I became afraid of death
Although it is a normal condition
Infects all living organisms
I apologize for the lengthening my sister @rebeccabe
Thank you so much for sharing your heart with me.
I am glad you like the story.
I usually do not write about death but @michelle.gent is helping me to write about it.
As you know this is not a true story so may turn out different than you expect. :)
Do you know this is the first time i talk about death of my brother.
At the steemit I goined it 4 months ago
You are the first person to hear this story
Because you are generous and spontaneous
And I entered my mind by your personality
Quiet my sister @rebeccabe
Yes i know isn't true just imagine
But it so wonderful 😍
Good luck
Be blessed.
Steemit is filled with wonderful people.