Contest Week-2 ] My Day with 10 Photos | Prize Pool- 30 Steem
Greeting friends,
Welcome to my belog,how are you all .I am @ roohiasif99 from Pakistan.I hope everybody fine too.Today here I am participating this wonderful contest which organized by @pea07.I am Thankful for my lovely friend arranging such a very interesting and unique contest .
Let's move towards and starts
This morning I woke up at six o'clock. It was dark all around. The beautiful morning weather was giving me a good feeling.I immediately prayed the Fajr prayer, then took a short walk on the roof of my house.
After that, I went to the kitchen and made breakfast. Today, I made barley porridge for breakfast and added almonds, pumpkin seeds, and seasams seeds.Which made it very delicious and after that I enjoyed my breakfast.
After that, I saw you going to the terrace.The pomegranate flower was in bloom. Looking at it, my heart was happy. There are many small and large ones on our terrace.And my husband and I love the teacher very much. Plants are their life. They water them every morning, clean them, and feel very happy.
Mid morning my maid came in my house.Then my husband got busy with housework and I started helping him with the housework.This picture is of my son's bedroom.And little by little, he cleaned the whole house.
In the afternoon, I went to the kitchen and made my children's favorite chicken biryani. Chicken biryani is eaten with great enthusiasm in our house, and I took this picture while my son was eating chicken biryani.
I prayed before eating, and then my son gave me a gift called Atomic Habit. he told me, "Mom, you must read this book.""It's a great book that explains how habits develop, how we can break bad habits, and how we can build good habits."In the evening, my husband said, "It's Sunday. After praying the Maghrib prayer, we'll go out for an outing. We'll go to the saddar have dinner there, and enjoy the day."
After that, at 7:30, our entire family got ready and went to Saddar together. The food there is famous all over Pakistan, so we enjoyed some delicious fried rice and biryani. Now, enjoy the fried rice and biryani!.
Is this a picture of this restaurant? A man in a costume was telling me not to take a picture, but I immediately took one.This famous area of Pakistan .
After we all finished eating, we were in the mood to eat ice cream. There was a big shop in front of us, from where we ate all the nice ice cream of our favorite flavor.
But my husband didn't eat the ice cream. He said, "I will eat the rubber candy with gusto." My son went to the rubber candy shop and brought the rubber candy back.In this way, we had a wonderful day today. In the morning, I did my homework. In the evening, we took people to the president's house to eat and enjoy.
So guys it's time to leave .I hope you like my belog and give me a good response.before I am going I would like to I invite my lovely dteemit friends @ rauja@sualeha @suboohi to I vote this contest .
Best regards,
@roohiasif99
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Hi @roohiasif99
Thank you for sharing such a great story about your activities with your family. The story is engaging and well-structured, from preparing breakfast to enjoying dinner. The sequence of activities is quite varied, and some of the photos are also well-taken.
I have a few suggestions: there are some grammatical and spelling errors, so by proofreading, you might be able to improve your sentence structure and avoid repetition to make your writing sound more natural and easier to understand. To make the photos more engaging, consider adding captions so readers can understand them more quickly. I hope these suggestions are helpful. Thank you.
#s34improvement
Thank you so much