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RE: DWELLING The Novel - Chapter Three: Nsima

in #story7 years ago

A new thread enters the tapestry as we get acquainted with Ndusen and his Chichewa-speaking family. There seems to be some tension between Kondwani and Stella. Ndusen's ignorance (real or pretended) of modern food inspection and marketing makes an interesting contrast with his exceptional — perhaps unique — knowledge of the building where he lives and works, and the people who live there. The story and its characters are developing deftly. I'll keep reading!