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RE: Mediocrity: Chapter 2

in #story8 years ago

Reads as though it were a Woody Alan movie... I think.
I really like the effortless flows, it could do with some lifts here and there but a good read all around. The title implies there is a first chapter,which I will find and read too.

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Thank you, will keep that in mind for the upcoming chapters. Will take a look at your work.