Actually it's about the same length, but there are definitely more chapters. When I'm finished putting it through I am going to try out some rearranging based on your feelings about it. The only reason I did it this way in the first place is when I tried going back and forth initially, it felt like too much jumping around. But I'll see what I can do.

And these three- well remember that they were put in hyberstasis as children and on their own. They grew up in a world without any unturned females, so they don't really know what happens during heat. They're pretty clueless about the vampire world actually, they've been on their own- hence they drink from humans even though they don't hurt anyone etc.