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RE: Where Happiness Fails - A Fantasy Novel: Chapter 1

in #story6 years ago

Wo! That escalated a bit quickly. Just when I was about to conclude a regal dumbness Ryle impressively pulls that off. I love the imagery you employed all through the writing. I could feel the scene. My best part? This line, "His voice was a dull saw on a tree trunk." Killed it for me. Overhaul one I enjoyed reading and would keep an eye on the sequels. Blog on :)

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