I thought I would be the first to comment on your post.But my friend @makowrites got here before.

It is true what he said.I don't think it is a good idea for you to write in english. I also feel that you have to work a lot on your english.

The reason you don't get votes is because you don't understand how steemit works.Just because you wrote a post,it won't get noticed by the people.

Steemit receives more than a thousands posts for each tag in less than a minute.The post you write don't stay visible for long.

So what you need to do is to go and comment on other people's post and also spend a lot of time in different discord groups.Follow the following steps:

1.Comment on other people's post

2.Make some friends,increase the number of your followers by joining at least 10 different discord groups.

3.Learn how everything works in this platform,study a lot,contact me when needed.

4.Spend more time in discord groups than you spend in steemit.

5.Use bots and other promotion services.

If you follow the things people are suggesting you in the comments,then you will find that you are getting noticed by people.