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RE: The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 2 (My Original Novel)

in #story8 years ago

Heya @ezzy,

Wow, things are about to get crazy! Dee is losing it! Very intriguing build up and great conversational play with both the main characters.

Next chapter coming up soon I hope!

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Hi@rea,

Thanks for the support! Yep, it's a fine balance between pacing and characterization in a novel but I'm slowly getting to grips with it. Stay tuned to see where this goes next!

All the best, @rea!