I just don't like to read about violence of any kind. As I kid I picked up a book somewhere, can't recall what it was about, but somewhere in there some woman slapped a kid, made me so revolted I thought I didn't like reading for a long time.
I like something thats more fun, some comedy to it. Don't get me wrong, your story is very well written. The dialogue between the sheriff and Alicia was very well done (at least it did it for me) I could feel the awkwardeness.
Some issues need be treated, be it palatable or not. I prefer to deal reality rather than fantasy. You'd agree with me there is more wickedness than love in the world today... Love is not entirely lost in the story tho. Also, the wicked wouldnt go unpunished, thats the reward of violence and why i chose to write along this line.. Thank you
@serenoblues... What is your style? Maybe i'd include in my next episode
I just don't like to read about violence of any kind. As I kid I picked up a book somewhere, can't recall what it was about, but somewhere in there some woman slapped a kid, made me so revolted I thought I didn't like reading for a long time.
I like something thats more fun, some comedy to it. Don't get me wrong, your story is very well written. The dialogue between the sheriff and Alicia was very well done (at least it did it for me) I could feel the awkwardeness.
Some issues need be treated, be it palatable or not. I prefer to deal reality rather than fantasy. You'd agree with me there is more wickedness than love in the world today... Love is not entirely lost in the story tho. Also, the wicked wouldnt go unpunished, thats the reward of violence and why i chose to write along this line.. Thank you
Good to know, you clearly put some thought into it. I'm like a child, I only like the fun stuff.