Tenerifemanitou (35)in #travel • 8 years ago (edited)A Haiku: Sunshiny coastline. A private, shinny yacht swims enjoying the sky. #nature #photography #life #poetry
Carefree, nice haiku. Again nicely extracted moment. But, is it "funny" appriopriate word for haiku, given its mandatory no-metaphors shape?
I agree, but it's funny that you are the only one with a constructive critique!
Ah, really? Steemit should be place for constructive critique, right? Thank you, anyway!