Your English is excellent.
My only correction is this word:
"Esther was also a victim of the decease" - I'm pretty sure you want the word disease (a medical condition/ailment) instead of decease (to stop living) - both in that sentence and the one following it.
Thank you. I did my best with the english.
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Your English is excellent.
My only correction is this word:
"Esther was also a victim of the decease" - I'm pretty sure you want the word disease (a medical condition/ailment) instead of decease (to stop living) - both in that sentence and the one following it.
Thank you. You have nice eyes. I fixed it.