RE: APPS FOR SELF IMPROVEMENT 3 (STAY HEALTHY AND HYDRATED WITH AQUA DROID)

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RE: APPS FOR SELF IMPROVEMENT 3 (STAY HEALTHY AND HYDRATED WITH AQUA DROID)

cuteflames (58)in #utopian-io • 5 years ago

I would very much like to see my corrections. Although, your comments contrast greatly with the review score given

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lordneroo (72) 5 years ago (edited)

I will cite a few examples:

That is, if you trying to lose or add weight, it can help in achieving that.

This sentence should read: "That is, if you are trying to lose or add weight, it can help in achieving that."

The developers of aqua droid came up with a scintillating idea to enable us drink the adequate amount of water needed for a healthy life

This one should read: "The developers of aqua droid came up with a scintillating idea to enable us to drink the minimum amount of water needed for a healthy life", or even "The developers of aqua droid came up with a scintillating idea to enable us to drink an adequate amount of water."

the app achieves its main aim of ensuring one gets to be more aware of his/her water intake.

This one should read: "the app achieves its main aim of ensuring one gets to be more aware of their water intake."

Now, regarding your remarks:

Although, your comments contrast greatly with the review score given

I went over everything once again and I still think I scored it correctly. Could you please explain?

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