YOU SMELL THE SEA

in #verse7 years ago

You smell the sea, said-
His surf, wind, salt...
When was this? How long?
Maybe it's just a phrase from the movie ?

What is the blast radius
You in the net of the ocean?
And on the sand your footprints,
And yet... very deep wounds

Go to the sea. Smell them
Only that no one knows...
Learned to live one day...
Otherwise... there is no escape.

You smell the sea!Again the surf
And the foam washes the feet of...
And there is no turning back
And even the gods are powerless...

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literary. Good work. it worth an upvote

Your poem makes me feelling some special atmosphere, and the last verse I like the most, keep it up! :)

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