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Well that was thoroughly disturbing...but you built up the suspense and tension well. I knew Henry would be up to no good, but didn't predict Marie would be the one to become his project. I thought she'd see it or something. I wonder what she will do when released into the night, but I'm also too squeamish to find out.

It took some turns that I did expect either.

I love it when that happens. Most of the time anyway. Sometimes it makes so much more work!

Hello @tristancarax, thank you for sharing this creative work! We just stopped by to say that you've been upvoted by the @creativecrypto magazine. The Creative Crypto is all about art on the blockchain and learning from creatives like you. Looking forward to crossing paths again soon. Steem on!