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Week-1 : Zany and the tiny colored dragon

 
Hello @saifuddinmahmud, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-1. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.5/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3Okay
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.8/1Okay
Total9.1/10
FeedbackYou have tried well, but you have left something to be desired, the bonding. The story lacks bonding between the two and too abrupt. And if you read it one more time, you have spelled the name of the main protagonist Zany as Jeannie or Jenny.
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