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RE: "Steemit Challenge s28wk1 : Zany and the tiny colored dragon
Week-1 : Zany and the tiny colored dragon
Hello @bristy1, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-1. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | - |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.6/3 | - |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | Okay |
| Total | 8.8/10 | |
| Feedback | It's a nice story about distressed girl Zany and the colorfu dragon which develop an intimate bonding. Your story could score better if you had given it a second read and determine whether Zany is a boy or a girl. You have used "he' and 'she both for her which is confusing and creates doubt. | |
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