Steemit Challenge s28wk1 : Zany and the tiny colored dragon

in #writing-s28wk128 days ago

Zany grew up in the village. He loves his village very much. Next to his village, there is a small pond, and he loves animals and birds very much and takes care of them. He wants to bring advanced birds from the city that will always stay with him like a pet bird. Somewhat like a myna bird, starling, and parrot.

He properly left his village and went to the city to a relative’s house. He doesn't want to stay for too long because there are many beloved animals and birds in the village. One evening he went outside, but on the way back the cloudy sky suddenly started raining and the electricity went out in that city.

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This little dragon spread colorful lights like a magic wand through its body and wings.

Just like our village lights up our homes with solar power, the city is not like that, it is operated entirely by electricity. However, some shops or houses use solar electricity.

He was coming along the road and got drenched in the rain. It was already winter, with winter clothes on his body, and it was raining like fog. Not too much rain! When the surroundings were not glowing with bright light! At that moment, colorful lights spread around him, making him feel like he had entered a dreamland, as if colorful lights were scattered by a magic wand!

Looking closely, he saw a small dragon. It spread its wings and flapped them, and colorful sparkling lights were coming out from its body through its wings and tail. Zany really wanted to hold this dragon in his hands. Since Zany is an animal lover, he called the dragon, “Hey, come and sit on my hand.”

The dragon seemed to understand his feelings and gently sat on his hand. Zany was very surprised—wow, how beautiful this dragon is. If he could take this dragon to his home with him, how wonderful it would be; he would keep it beside him all the time.

He started walking with it on his hand, but the dragon did not fly away; it stayed with him. Zany also understood that the dragon would go with him. Both understood each other, and the next morning they went back to the village home. Zany found a dragon just as he had wished, so he forgot everything and loved and cherished the dragon dearly. Now this dragon understands nothing except Zany because of all the affection it receives.

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Zany plays with him during the day and sometimes flies a kite.

Since Zany has many animals and birds, his little dragon became very delighted seeing them and blended in with everyone. It is not limited only to Zany! It plays with every animal and bird and enjoys beautiful moments, and in this way their friendship becomes even stronger.

He sometimes takes his animals and birds to beautiful places, such as playing in the green grass, and the animals play happily and eat green grass.

Meanwhile, Jenny plays with the dragon. Since in the daylight, his colorful lights are not visible, yet he has developed such a love for her that he does not understand anything without her. Since it is a mild winter, they like this gentle light of the sun very much and in the morning, they see beautiful small hills, green trees and a seven-colored rainbow all around.

Jagun likes the seven-colored rainbow very much because he can see different combinations of colors there. Among the dragon's favorite things are colorful lights. That is, he likes rainbows, colorful lights, especially at night, he likes it very much that there are colorful sparkling lights around him. At the same time, the little dragon himself likes colorful lights

While writing this imaginary story of the dragon and Zany, I truly felt as if I myself had become Zany, holding the dragon in my hands, loving it, introducing it to all my animals and birds, and enjoying those beautiful times—especially the colorful sparkling lights of the dragon at night that captivate my heart!

Through creativity, you too can tell your stories to everyone, and for this, I invite you all.
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Week-1 : Zany and the tiny colored dragon

 
Hello @zakaria121, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-1. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4/5-
Originality & Uniqueness2.5/3-
Presentation0.8/1-
My observation0.8/1-
Total8.1/10
FeedbackI can see you really enjoyed writing this story but you perhaps missed the theme of the prompt since this story is all about one evening.
If you read the prompt once again you will see that Zany is a girl but you have used 'He' for her.
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InshaAllah, I will definitely pay attention after this.