"Steemit Challenge s28wk2 : Remembering Through Healing
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Hello My Steemain Friends ,
Today I am writing about an interesting Steemit Engagement Challenge S28- W2: which is all time my favourite topic ""Remembering Through Healing""" this amazing challenge organised by @dove11
She often wished ----------- leave, even when people do.
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Tina couldn't shake the pain and guilt of losing her mother. After so many years, she had returned, yet she couldn't find her mother. Every childhood memory, every corner of her house, reminded her of her mother's presence. She was there for her in everything, working together.
Tina suddenly remembers old memories, a smile forming on her face: how she would bicker with her mother at work, how she would shirk work, how her mother would yell at her, how she would talk and play. Thinking about this, she starts laughing. But suddenly, as she remembers that her mother is no longer in this world, a pang of pain and anguish appears on her face, and tears well up in her eyes.
One day, she was sitting alone, remembering her childhood, how happy she was with her parents and siblings. One day, when she went to college, her life took a new turn, a new turn. A boy named Anubhav came into her life, and they became friends. That friendship gradually blossomed into love. However, Anubhav was a bit of a flirt, and because they didn't belong to the same caste, their marriage was difficult.
Unaware of Anubhav's flirtatious nature, Tina believed that their marriage wouldn't be possible because of their different castes. Thinking about this, she decided to elope. She took all her jewelry and money and ran away with Anubhav.
As soon as her parents learned of this news, her father couldn't bear the pain of his daughter's shattering his years-long reputation in an instant. He died. Meanwhile, Anubhav, too, was reluctant to marry Tina. He kept her in a live-in relationship, took all her jewelry and money, and left her.
Seeing this, Tina cried a lot, but she didn't know how to go home. She somehow managed to survive and continued living there. Sometimes, she would sneak around her house in the dark, trying not to let anyone know. But she still held herself responsible for her father's death, and while this was true, she didn't have the courage to confront her mother.
But one day, her mother also succumbed to illness. As soon as Tina learned of this, she was devastated, as she couldn't see either her father or her mother for the last time. She was so overwhelmed by the guilt of her crimes that her tears wouldn't stop. She worried about her siblings and how they would be supported, so she returned home. Her siblings didn't complain, because they had seen enough.
Tina wholeheartedly cared for her siblings, cared for them, and continued her job. But her guilt wouldn't go away. When she lay down at night after putting her siblings to sleep, tears would constantly well up as she thought about how one small mistake or carelessness had brought the family to a terrible state.
One day, she was crying profusely, apologizing for her transgressions in front of her parents' photo. As she fell asleep, she felt someone caressing her head. The touch felt familiar. It brought her immense relief, saying, "Don't worry, forget everything, and be happy. This was destined to happen, that's why this happened to us. You should be free from this crime."
Tina suddenly opened her eyes. It felt as if her parents were in the room, surrounding her, offering forgiveness. She looked around, then fell asleep. This continued for two or three nights. She felt someone patting her head, and she would open her eyes. But today, when she mustered up the courage to stand up, she saw that the chair in her room, where her father and mother used to sit, was shaking.
At first, she was a little scared. Then she went and sat next to the chair and said, "Mom and Dad, if you're around here, I apologize for all my transgressions. I've hurt you, and I can't sleep peacefully. I made a terrible mistake, please forgive me." As she spoke, a curtain flew and fluttered over her face, as if comforting her. It was as if her parents had placed their hands on her head. When she removed the curtain from her head, the chair stopped shaking.
Tina understood that her parents had forgiven her. No one was unhappy with her anymore. It felt as if the turbulent, turbulent thoughts in her mind had all but subsided. The atmosphere at home seemed utterly peaceful. She hadn't felt that way since that day, bringing relief to Tina's heart and her parents' souls. Tina lived happily with her siblings.
I want to invite my friends to take part in this contest: , @ninapenda , @heriadi , @sduttaskitchen"
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