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RE: Contest: Steemit Challenge - Season 28 Week 2: Remembering Through Healing
Week-2 : Remembering Through Healing
Hello @sur-riti, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 1/1 | Good |
| Total | 9.6/10 | |
| Feedback | You have presented a nice story with a touch of sorrow and bad memories. However, a little healing touch and reference her mom in the story could take it to the top. | |
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Perhaps none of my efforts or the stories can match the stories written by a great writer like you, but I' made a sincere effort to heal Tina's mother's grief through the words written below.
As Tina fell asleep, she dreamed of meeting her mother. Her mother embraced her and cried, "Forgive me, daughter. I later realized that remarrying was my mistake. Take care of your siblings. God will reward you well." Tina also started crying in her dream.
Thanks.