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RE: Steemit Challenge s28wk2 : Remembering Through Healing

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Week-2 : Remembering Through Healing

 
Hello @lumiradhi, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3Okay
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.4/10
Feedback
You have done well with the theme of the story but certain sentences confused me. For instance "Your mum didn’t see you that way but I do said think he vice quivering." And this is not the only one which caused you points deduction. Be careful next week.
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Thank you sir. That was typo graphical errors. I will be more careful next week