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RE: Steemit Challenge s28wk2: Remembering Through Healing
Week-2 : Remembering Through Healing
Hello @joslud, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.6/10 | |
| Feedback | I am thrilled reading your story how Tina felt when she opened her eyes to her mother as a luminous being, not the idealized perfection of memory, nor the figure once she hated. Tina must have yearned deeply for her, but I missed why she had returned. A little reference of her object would take this story to the top. | |
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