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RE: "Steemit Challenge s28wk2 : Remembering Through Healing

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Week-2 : Remembering Through Healing

 
Hello @fortwis09, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation0.9/1Good
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10
FeedbackThis indeed was a poetic and philosophical effort but missed some of the finer points mentioned in the prompt. You missed the aim that brought her back. You missed the struggle between mom and her leave her home
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