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RE: Steemit Challenge s28wk3: When Hope Returns
Week-3 : Hope Grows Like Spring
Hello @akmalshakir, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Okay | |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3.9/3 | Okay | |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay | |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay | |
| Total | 9.5/10 | ||
| Feedback | You have a nice and touchy story that complements the theme well but I am surprised why you have used first person as well third dialogues for your protagonist which has loosened your grip on the story. | Example > I went through something he said carefully. Something I thought I would not recover from. Nina simply nodded and said that Spring still comes even if winter forgets to leave. | |
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