steemit challenge s28wk4: Hidden Truth Unveiled

Tony, the old man who sat quietly for years, never really talked to anyone. Suddenly, he said something to everyone, I want to share some true stories with you. Timothy and David were both shocked to hear him and looked back at him. After hearing this, a strange glow appeared in Tony's eyes, as if he was about to reveal a secret of many years today.
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Then Tony said, This treasure is not just a gold thing, it is the history of an entire city, which was built with people's dreams and hopes many years ago. At that time, the old official controlled everything for his own interests, but my father hid all the documents at that time. But now I need your help to reveal the truth. And I will come with you and present the true story.

After hearing these words, Timothy's heart began to tremble. He understood that it was not just an old box or diary, but inside it were the stories of many people in the city, their hopes, dreams, and a wonderful feeling of faith. Then David opened the letters and saw the information hidden in all the reports, old photographs, and the secret activities of that officer and his associates.

At one point, after seeing all the documents, they went back to the tunnel in the dark of the night. They were looking at the walls of the tunnel with the light of the flashlight. The smell of soil and old days was mixed in these old walls. As they went like this, Timothy and David kept entering further and further. At every turn, they seemed to be facing new mysteries. Sometimes there were ancient letters, sometimes small documents hidden underground. Then Timothy slowly said, "There are not just old things here, there is history hidden here." David nodded his head in agreement and said, "You're right, the true story is always important."
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Finally, a small door opened in front of them. Inside was another box, which was more protected than the previous box. Timothy slowly opened the box. Inside were heirlooms, old documents, and a letter. The letter said, "What I did was only for my own benefit. But the truth will come out one day."

David was surprised to read the letter and said, "It's not just a treasure, it's the history of our city." Timothy nodded in agreement. Tony stood quietly, looking at the two of them with a calm face. They kept saying, "All truths will be revealed one day, and that time seems to have come today."

The next day, they gave all the evidence to the police. The old officer's secret conspiracy was shattered. The people of the town were amazed to see that what had been hidden for so long was now known to everyone. Timothy thought, "The truth can never be hidden forever. What is done with courage and honesty, the truth eventually comes out.

Tony smiled a little, as if he was smiling a little peace after a long time. He was smiling thinking that this night had not only shown them treasures, but also showed them the story of their courage and faith. Finally, both Timothy and David understood that this night had brought an invaluable lesson to their lives, that they understood how to value courage and honesty.

Because of them, the people of the city now know that no matter how many secrets there are in ancient history, brave people and patience will reveal all the truth one day or another. And because of Timothy, David and Tony's courage, every person in the city understood that the truth cannot be hidden as much as it is wanted. No matter how hard you try.

As today's story ended, Timothy was thinking only one thing, this night is an important lesson not only for us, but also for the future. Honesty and courage never lose their value. And Tony, looking silently at the city, was slowly feeling peace. They both felt that this night had changed their lives. Now they understood that the truth always comes to light in the end.

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Week-4 : Hidden Truth Unveiled

 
Hello @mamun12345, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness0.8/3-
Presentation0.8/1-
My observation0.8/1Okay
Total9/10
FeedbackYou missed the prompt right from the beginning as Tony has shared it only with the garage owner which was later told to the police officer by Timothy. Your story lacked the main point the treasure, but centered around ethics.
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@dove11

@dove11, I was surprised to see the marks for this contest entry. Here, I think you mentioned the total marks erroneously.

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Week-4 : Hidden Truth Unveiled

 
Hello @mamun12345, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3-
Presentation0.8/1-
My observation0.8/1Okay
Total9/10
FeedbackYou missed the prompt right from the beginning as Tony has shared it only with the garage owner which was later told to the police officer by Timothy. Your story lacked the main point the treasure, but centered around ethics.
Moderated By
@dove11