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RE: "Shadows Behind Stardom"

in #writing-s28wk52 days ago

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Week-5 : Shadows Behind Stardom

 
Hello @sojib1996, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.7/3Okay
Presentation1/1Good
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.4/10
FeedbackI like your use and heavy reliance on symbolic, poetic motifs like morning mist/fog, dust of his past, shadow of fear, light of truth, and darkness behind brightness. However, your story is a bit too far from the theme but repeats weather/nature which takes it away from investigating journalism.
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