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RE: Steemit Challenge - Season 28 Week-5: Shadows Behind Stardom

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Week-5 : Shadows Behind Stardom

 
Hello @sana-khan, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.7/3Okay
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.1/10
FeedbackYour story was moving in right way but you left too many misspelled words, like "walkid", "curiosety". Your work excels at formulaic storytelling but lacks basics of investigation by Khaled. His work is more symbolic than real inside journalistic investigation.
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