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RE: Desafío Steemit - Temporada 28, Semana 5: Sombras tras el estrellato

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Week-5 : Shadows Behind Stardom

 
Hello @rosselena, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5
Originality & Uniqueness3/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.4/10
FeedbackYou have a great story but it mismatched the prompt at couple of places. Like you said Khaled tried to contact Singh several times but failed but according to prompt Singh accepted his interview and called him at his farm house. Do you really think a journalist needs a computer engineer to upload a story on internet? Also,, the investigation part needed more effort.
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Muchas gracias por la verificación amigo pero de eso se trata la escritura creativa tratar de crear tu propia historia usando tu propia imaginación,