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RE: "Shadows Behind Stardom"

in #writing-s28wk525 days ago (edited)

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Week-5 : Shadows Behind Stardom

 
Hello @shahid76, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Good
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10
FeedbackYou have done a nice attempt yet a few weak links like a junior bank officer's reach to the entire accounts of a Mafia sounds strange. Mafias deal in black money so bank is the last place where you will get such clues.
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