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RE: Steemit Challenge s28wk6: Unexpected Chat's True Twist
Week-1 : Unexpected Chat's True Twist
Hello @chiagoziee, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-6. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria is provided below:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.7/3 | - |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | - |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | - |
| Total | 9.3/10 | |
| Feedback | You have a reasonable story but I found some mistakes like name shifts of protagonist Antony/Anthony/Tony, and awkward phrasing like "imagine the spirit of courage showing up with a blink of an eye" and more, besides extra words even if by a small margin. | |
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