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RE: Desafío Steemit - Temporada 28, Semana 6: El verdadero giro de un chat inesperado
Week-6 : Unexpected Chat's True Twist
Hello @rosselena, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-6. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria is provided below:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.5/10 | |
| Feedback | You have a nice and different theme. That's very much possible but did Antony ask her for his money back? You have changed his name from Antony to Anthony! | |
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Muchas gracias por la verificación de mi participación querido @dove11 los nombres del personaje son los de la dinámica con respecto a si Anthony le hablo a Tina, no ya que siempre estaba cerrado su negocio allí está escrito no sé si fue el traductor que uso o no entendío el final
Saludos y feliz tarde
Let me answer your query, first if you read the prompt once again, the name is Antony and not Anthony. Second, Antony could have stopped payment when he found his wallet missing and third it is not feasible to withdraw $120000 or 35,396,388 Venezuelan bolivers (VES) in cash from a bank in Venezuela or anywhere in the world besides payments for a house are always account payee. The prompt says although it's just a story but we need to keep the facts intact. Also, as per the prompt Tina was just a sales girl that's why I asked why she could not be traced through owners of the store? I hope I cleared your doubts, thank you.
Jajaja but I just kidding 🤣 you know it's just a writing exercises my friend
You are welcome, I do not generally answer such questions, but since you are such a nice person, I wanted to clear your doubts.