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RE: "Left Behind" - A Short Story

in #writing6 years ago

To be honest, it started like a story about some student who just didn't want to read that short story and write that essay. But the more I read, the better I understand that it's not that case. At the end it was very creepy.. Can you imagine opening the door and changing so much? Scary!

This is a great short story and I like that it's reasonably short :) There are so many 'short' stories here that take half an hour to read :D yours was much faster and very enjoyable. You can bring the story to the reader in a way that he/she wants to continue until it's finished just to wonder and say: WHAT?! I didn't expect such an end! :)

Thank you so much for sharing!

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Some famous person said "something good, when brief, is even better". Thanks for reading and commenting!