SILVER LINING #21

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This is a complementary series for the Steemit-exclusive, original novel A Day in the Clouds. Be sure to check out the latest chapter's parts one and two before you read this post to avoid spoilers.


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God save ye, Cloudhead. How do you fare in this fine day? Wonderful, one would hope. As some of you may know, I got engaged last weekend, so I was having second thoughts whether I should post a chapter this week or not. I didn't want to bury that post beneath this was my main reason haha!

Moving on from the pleasantries, we pick up where we left Ledd and his fellow Sachaphoyans. Prito is up to his old tricks, and Lumpia is unimpressed as always. Adobo tries desperately to catch up, even though she doesn't need to. As Lumpia always says, "this isn't a race." Good luck telling Kinilaw to slow down! Sometimes I think that he's forced to put up a tough exterior because he's afraid of being rejected. What do you guys think? Have you ever felt the same way?

Also, what is up with Menudo lying to the gang? Little did he know that everyone, or at least Ledd, is on to him. Could he be hiding something terrifying? It's such a strange coincidence that he lied and didn't join the crew the same day as the giants invaded the town. Hmm...

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No? Jeez ... You guys have really gotten good at seeing past my thinly veiled attempts of misdirection. Okay, okay. I'll come clean.

My name is @jedau, and I'm a professional liar. I tell half-truths to entertain people, and I earn money (well, not for this post, or this whole series in fact) by making up stories. There. Are you happy now?

Anyway, this chapter provides a clearer view of Ledd's life before the Great War. Or, does it? Was this a memory or was this an elaborate ruse orchestrated by the giants to manipulate how he remembered his past? Was this a side effect of the memories he ingested a couple of chapters back? Am I ever going to answer any of these questions?

For the past 20 (wow! :o) installments, I've been spoonfeeding you the information and over-explaining things. In fact, it had been so bad that you've already gotten used to all of my tricks. Well then, allow me to throw you a curve ball!

How about this time I don't supply you with answers? How about that? You might ask "Well, who's Prito?" or "What the hell's an Adarna?" (FYI, it helps if you search for "Ibong Adarna" if you want to get credible results, unless you want your search to come up with pictures of a popular, yet controversial, sexy actress), well you're not going to find answers here!!

Haha nope, it's not that "time of the month." The last time I checked, I still haven't gotten my period. I've been consulting my mother (who's an OB-GYN) and she just looks at me like I'm a joke. This is a serious issue, woman! In all seriousness though, I just wanted to give you guys room to search for all of the Easter eggs I've peppered in this chapter. Minor spoiler, it's filled with tasty tasty references :D

We're 20 chapters into this, so you'll understand if I want to keep things fresh. Comment below the pictures of your favorite reference and let's discuss. Who knows, you might find even more references than I wrote :/

Oh! And one last thing...

Voting for witnesses is free, but your one vote could dictate the course of this platform. So, choose your witnesses carefully. With that being said, please support @lukestokes by going to this link and voting for lukestokes.mhth (currently at 40 during writing). He's an awesome individual who really takes time to listen and offer his thoughts to anyone. A huge boon to the community, he's been an active member for almost a year now. He's trustworthy, transparent and dependable--all the traits you would want for a witness. So do your part to help Steemit now :D



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I really like the idea of telling the truth to meet people.
Today is a classic lie, every time people live more lies.
Thank you very much dear friend @jedau for sharing this material
Have a beautiful weekend

I didn't mean to deceive you hear, my friend. I was just playing a trick that I wasn't able to keep up :D I hope you had a wonderful weekend as well!

What's the voting thing about? Mind explaining that for me XD

Here's a detailed post about it: https://steemit.com/steemit-guides/@pfunk/a-full-steemit-user-s-guide-to-steem-witnesses

I don't want to rewrite it because I'm not an expert on the topic. It's funny, I'm reading Amethyst Chapter Two now. Will comment on it after.

Oh no that's the last badly formatted one of it XD

That's great to hear then. I hope readership picks up then :D

Aww... we have to search now? I'm already pressed for time, I will spend one minute google searching Ibong Adarna and that's all I can promise for today but I expect the next silver lining to be lined up with information and referential Easter eggs served on a silver platter to our delight. Thanks bro

BY THE WAY, the beginning was probably one of your most worst ways of wording this very sentence. I will show you what I mean, and cut out the rest and you will get the same reaction I got when I first read that snippet lol

"As some of you may know, I got engaged last weekend, so I was having second thoughts"

I'll just leave that right there lol

Haha! Sorry for that, bro. I just wanted to shake things up. Time has been pressing against me vigorously these days as well. If only we could use STEEM to buy more of it, then we would have enough opportunities to do everything we need!

Taken out of context, that reads really awfully! Hahaha! Good thing I don't have that as the preview text or I would be in a world of trouble haha

Lol yeah, I was only poking fun, no worries :) yay Steem has hit 2 dollars!

Haha yeah, I saw :D Had I known it was going through the roof, I would've adjusted my bid! I had a hanging order from a few weeks back that automatically triggered. Man, if only I could've adjusted that near the 24-hour high. That would've been huge!

Bro me tooooooo

Oh well, we just need to take this as a lesson, and anticipate another rise next time :D

yes indeed, I will write you in steemit.chat, comments are piling up here!

Haha! No worries about it. The best metric I look out for is the number of comments, so I'm always happy when it's ticking high :D

Hey, I am impressed with you work and would like to try it out myself here.
May I know how do you made the chapter navigation links?
Can you share with me the html code for them? :) Thanks!

Thanks for the compliment! Sure, I'm not selfish with the formatting code. Here you go :)

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Hey, my @jedau!

This is a post containing enough riddles to keep Batman guessing for weeks! Is Menudo some kind of spy? Or worse still, their traitor?

But that's a great aspect to your writing abilities. The layers upon layers of depth as that takes a special kind of creativity. I'll be looking out for more clues as the story progresses, man...

Otherwise, hope you're still basking in the blissfulness of being engaged. It's a great feeling when you know your tying the knot with a person you truly believe in 100%. Make the most out of these precious moments of your life. You'll always look back at them with a harmonising fondness in the future.

Watching out soon for more from the master of all things "code-worded". :)

(p.s. Already got my vote in with Luke. I wish him nothing but the best, seems like an awesome gentleman.)

HAHA! Batman actually had already given up a while back. He said he'd rather go up against The Riddler any day than deal with the shit I'm putting him through haha I really don't know how to take that, so I'm considering it a compliment :D

I really enjoy peppering my work with easter eggs. Since I enjoy spotting them in other people's work, I consider it as sort of a reward for eagle-eyed readers haha!

I think the engagement high will only fade and be replaced on the wedding day itself. Definitely tiring planning everything, but I wouldn't have it any other way. Thank you for the sage advice, brother! I will surely take that to heart :D

Luke's a former employer of mine, so I got to know him more personally. He is an awesome gentleman indeed!

I continue to be THRILLED for you and your lady :)

And I am still giggling at the thought of you with your period. Ha!! Though there are definitely times when I'm convinced there is such thing as man periods, just without some of the more inconvenient (or painful) physical effects, more the hormonal moody aspects LOL.
I loved the last chapter, and honestly I don't always want to pick a part a story in terms of who might be what, I sometimes just like being entertained without thinking too hard...letting the author do the thinking for me!
I actually opened up your book the other day and then made a decision. Nope, not until I finish it the way I began it. Then I will read it cover to cover, but until then I will practice delayed gratification :)

@randomli meant to reply to your wonderful messages, but it seems she hasn't gotten around to it. She's on the cusp of finishing her masteral degree, so she's swamped with that, work and the wedding stuff haha

I do believe strongly that there are man periods, even though I say it jokingly. It's the hormones that dictate it, and our gender isn't free from the fluctuations no matter how much we try to believe that to be true.

Haha! Way to ace the marshmallow test, sister! :) This has been such a wonderful ride, and I'm glad that I had the chance to share it with you, @ezzy and the others :D

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Oh nice! I'm on a roll with these comments. Thanks for the notification!

Thanks again for the shout out, Jed. :)

Check out the latest exchange transfer report. I think you'll like how the beneficiaries are set on that post.

Hey, man! No worries :D I'm happy to help you out any way I can, you know that. I'll check it out in a bit and will reply there :D

But if you're not providing answers however are we supposed to know if our completely wild speculative guesses were anywhere within the realm of correct or not? [whine] XD

I didn't actually make any connection between Menudo's caginess and the giant invasion. The downside of always assuming the best of people. I'd be knocked off right quick in a survival situation I reckon. I figured like Ledd did that he was a bit embarrassed that his lack of practice meant that he would struggle to keep up with his more acrobatic friends. Would have to find out more about Kinilaw (if you were going to write more about them) to work out if he is using brashness to cover insecurity or if he's just a jerk (some people are just jerks, one of my characters is a jerk because he just is, there's exactly nothing in his backstory that explains his obnoxiousness).

How many more chapters have you got planned? Don't do that face, that's not spoilerific and it gives me half a chance at guessing what you might be able to write about XD

I think I do remember a time from ages ago where I was putting up fronts to try to appear first cool and then something approaching normal. Gave that up after a while.

In the meantime I'm still wondering how the Sachaphoyans are landing in their wingsuits, those things pick up some serious speed! Their air control must be pretty awesome XD

I will gladly answer your questions here, my friend! :) The thing is though, you could just search Google for their name, and you would immediately find out why I wrote them the way I did haha Take into account health implications and such ;)

How many more chapters have you got planned?

How many hours are there in a typical day on Earth :'(

I think I do remember a time from ages ago where I was putting up fronts to try to appear first cool and then something approaching normal

Oh yeah, I think we all go through with that phase. Particularly during our teen years or early 20s. Like we're "too cool for school" haha I just laugh when I see people who act that way nowadays. I wish they would have a laugh when they look back at that time in their lives themselves.

The Sachaphoyans do have elite air control. It's not that evident because of the deteriorated knowledge that Ledd has, but yeah. Since it's the only means of transportation for them, I imagine them having a firm grasp of it. Wind isn't as powerful as water though, so yeah there's a limitation there.

Not spoon feeding us? How dare you? I quite flatly refuse to think for myself

;0)

How dare I!? How dare you!!! HAHA Tough luck, buddy ;) You know, I've written this quite some time ago, and I really didn't intend it to fall the same week as my proposal. Gave me such a convenient excuse to slack off. In any case, I think you might find searching for their names a bit appetizing :D

Then I shall search, I shall search and see what bounteous treats the internets can serve me up :0)

Did the internet provide you with a bountiful yield? I imagine the google machine has been helpful with your quest, dude-meister.

It provides me with a strange big bird!!!

Oh shoot! Did it lull you to sleep?? Did you cut yourself in hopes of avoiding the gentle slumber?? Did you have lime in hand?? Am I talking to a stone statue?? Did the bird... Did it defecate on you? Oh Bathala...

Funnily enough it almost Lulled me to sleep!! A fine tale indeed. To the point I tried to order it for my daughter!

Maybe it's your Scottish genes that helped you allay sleep! It's mandatory material here for high school students, so yeah. Definitely let me know the ending if you come around to it though. I have never finished the book all the way through even though I passed the subject with flying floating-near-the-ground colors :/