Sea Siren Part 1

in #writing8 years ago



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My own seaside cottage at Holmes Beach on Ana Maria Island—it seemed a dream come true.

When Harry phoned me with the news my offer to purchase was accepted, I was over the moon with joy. Of course, I’d have to wait for a lull in business, before I could go down and spend a few weeks by the shore.

Tom Eaton, my partner, thought it an excellent opportunity for me to get entirely out of publishing and write.



“Frankly,” he reminded me, “the publishing trade is a failing enterprise”. He paused and arched an eyebrow as if expecting my objection. When I raised none, he went on: “vintage houses like ours are slowly going the way of the dinosaur, and isn’t that just the case?”

Tom had a number of quirks and I had no idea why he ever partnered with me, but we made our share of money over the years and I wasn’t worried in the least if the bottom eventually fell out. Mind you, that’s me—I’m a dreamy romantic, in love with the Thirties and rainy days and sappy romances like The Ghost and Mrs. Muir.



Cat—that’s Kate Eaton, his wife—well anyway, Cat and I are on the same wavelength and watch all those old films. I call her Cat because she has these amazing green eyes that remind me of Kim Novak in Bell, Book & Candle—actually, she looks like her—purrs like her too, but don’t get me going.

I’m a confirmed forty-year old bachelor and will probably stay that way until I die. Subject to change, if I meet the right girl.



Cat thinks it’s a wonderful idea—just the thought of sitting on the shore with a glass of wine at sunset, or sitting on the porch during rainstorms. That’s right—she’s a hopeless romantic like me and wants nothing more than for me then to finally meet Mrs. Right.

“She’s out there, you know, waiting in the mist,” she purrs, eyes staring off into space.

I can almost see her, the girl of my dreams, but I’m as likely to end up with Mrs. Muir as Mrs. Right—in other words, it’s not happening anytime soon, if ever at all.



But just thinking about Gene Tierney makes me misty eyed—all those black and white vistas of her walking by the sea—it’s enough to make me mad with longing for a life that will never be.

About six months later, things slow down—it’s the worst November Tom and I can ever recall. He suggests—no, actually ‘orders’ me to go south.



“Go to the Island—put your feet up—enjoy those Gulf breezes,” he intones.

“Go Daniel—fall in love, just once in your life,” Cat whispers, as if it were a real possibility.

Mind you, looking into her lovely face and the far off look in her eyes, I half-believe it too—but then, I am a hopeless romantic—more hopeless than romantic, I concede.

But little did I know what awaited me in those Gulf breezes and that sleepy seaside cottage.



© 2018, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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Una casa cerca de la playa en un buen plan para descansar, para escribir o simplemente para olvidar. Pero si hablamos de encontrar amores, es un buen compañero el mar. Lo ideal sería que si vas a dar un paso hacia adelante, debes dejar algunos pesos detrás: como experiencias pasadas no tan gratas. La idea de enamorarse, es un buen consejo, pero por lo visto, no mandamos en nuestro corazón. Presiento grandes sorpresas para Daniel. Esperaré mañana. Un feliz domingo, @johnjgeddes.

Vamos al mar para encontrarnos o perdernos, Nancy - estoy segura de una cosa - Daniel encontrará la magia

45 years old and 'never kissed a girl' I should say it is time to fall in love:)Not a lot of Gene Tierney's around though. He may have settle for the fish and chips girl:)

Take me to the beach, writer man:)

It happens - there are a lot of Daniels out there - delicatessen girls are usually pretty for some reason - you can bet the moment is sandals touch sand that it will be magic :)

A confirmed bachelor who is a hopeless romantic. What a wonderful intro to a story. It kind of sounds like he has a bit of a crush on dear Catherine...or at least hopes he'll find someone just like her. We shall see, won't we

The sea is the membrane between the natural and the metaphysical, so magic is afoot :)

I suspect he is half in love with Cat already, probably not a good idea!

I think you're right, my friend :)

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The narrative takes me back to those past moments where nostalgia reigns. There are always adorable moments in our memories. Best regards John

Wow... Nice.
Now I have the background for the Part Two I read.
Beautiful build-up

thank you - (it's a supernatural romance and the girl is a Siren - a mythical temptress. She may appear too bold, but that's what Sirens do :)