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RE: Ahe’ey - Breakfast with a View (An Original Novel - Part 6)

in #writing9 years ago

You have a very enjoyable light narrative style. It reminded me of the Little Longnose (fairy tale) by German writer Wilhelm Hauff. In the fairy tale, a boy is brought to a witch house where anthropomorphic guinea pigs and squirrels are sliding on a crystal floor wearing walnut shells on their feet. When I read your stuff I catch myself that I often don’t pay attention to what characters are talking about or doing, but only slide down the page on the little walnut shells lullabied by their sound.

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"anthropomorphic guinea pigs and squirrels are sliding on a crystal floor wearing walnut shells on their feet"
What a delightful image! I must check out that book. Thanks @mgaft1. J.