Perpetuation (an original poem)

in #writing6 years ago

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Hello Steem Fam! Here is a poem I recently wrote about the monotony associated with love and life. Everything is a cycle that ends where it began, typically out of negative energy and reborn from some semblance of positivity. At least, that's how i perceive the cycles.


Cycles perpetuate
Life will reciprocate
Fuck up & get fucked
Lucked out or out of luck
Maniacal monotony
A monster that's menacing
Entrancing, enhancing
Then thrashing about
Impossible to stand throughout the clout
Self-doubt hangs heavier than thunder clouds
Gale force streams of tears etch lines
In my grimacing facade
Stale salt left from the previous tides
Are begrudgingly washed

Leaving new trails
Bereaved by past fails
Grievances that never pale
Seemingly, I'll never escape this hell


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Thank you for taking the time to read this piece! I always welcome any input, interpretations or constructive criticisms!

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You are awesome bro! I'm feeling this one, especially today as I'm feeling the monotony of work.

Thanks @falseyedols! Work and monotony are synonymous more often than not. Good luck getting through the mundane.

Awesome poem man. Actually the truth is we all escape at some point this hell just to jump back in it without even knowing it what an irony :P. Awesome piece man one of the best on the today's feature. Thank you for your great work. Keep on grinding results will come. It all comes together here after some time. God Bless You. Peace and Love.

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