RE: Amazon overreaction and Adult Dungeon realization
I like and feel more interested in the witches story, i've read in your blog but... writting is perfect but...
So Amazon doesnt like asses? no sense... i'm pretty sure they feel comfortable with any violence image but an ass... , the ass of the model of your cover is so great! how can anybody feel ofended by it?
You know about my trying learn english, so... i'd like ask one question (asnwer if you want of course i know you are not a personal teacher): "skin for worry I’d hurt" why is not "for worrying"?
And i dont know if you read my other post about the witches text and how i saw it as a comic...
Gooddd luck with Amazon anyway and you never forget you write soooo welllll, i really enjoy reading a so perfect building text and how words are cared.
thank you! Yes, amazon is a curse and a blessing. Butts are perfectly natural!
"skin for worry I'd hurt" is an example of poor writing. It should be "worrying" as that word conveys more action and sense of movement.
My writing has a lot of "for," "in," and prepositional phrases because I think while writing and don't always craft the words to produce the best effect all the time. I'm working on it, so pointing that out is a worthy notice.
It should be "I pushed myself off her without pushing against her fine young skin worrying that I’d crush or hurt her more.