Thank you.
I noticed the errors after posting the story (most of the errors are from when I was first writing it in 3rd person and I changed it to 1st person) and I have not yet edited the mistakes in this post.
The next part is posted https://steemit.com/writing/@scarletskylor/a-buck-s-life-part-two, I tried harder to get the mistakes.
Thank you for reading it.