@d-pend - Hmmm. An interesting concept - letting your subconscious express, without the censorship. It is often difficult to achieve due to the shackles of 'acceptable norms' on our mind. I am glad to see that you break free.
The poem is a beautiful example of such unrestrained expression. I like the way you express the human faces as blank screens on which the events of the world around are reflected in a chaotic movie.
Especially -
More platitudes & sermons
strange inertia & the excitement of rebels
projected on our faces:
mundane & magic silver screens.
Very well said.
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Regards,
@vm2904
Thanks a lot for reading and taking the time to sift through this stream of consciousness. Glad you enjoyed the closing stanza. I often see the ending as the most important part of the piece. I like that image too - thinking of ourselves as actors, directors, and screenwriters in the film of life - and yet also the very screen on which the drama is projected!