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RE: Alone(Original Poem #24)(Writing Impact Challenge)

in #writingimpact7 years ago

the narration of finding oneself surrounded by sound, by noise, by people, by commotion, but feeling absolutely, inexorably alone.

I know this well, I feel it in your metaphors, the impassable wall, the hidden self, finding silence in the noise.

Thank you for sharing, @iamflow, I know you are not necessarily the narrator here, but, please know, the narrator is not alone in this world. A world where people prioritize so many minor things, there is much to be found in silence, I know.

Believe in you, mate, and thank you for the share.

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Thank you carmalain, I appreciate your understanding truly <3 Thank you for leaving a comment mate :D