Steemit Challenge s28wk4: Hidden Truth Unveiled

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The beam of their flashlights shook across the diary’s brittle pages. Timothy wiped away dust and a name surfaced again and again

Edouard Marceau, former town treasurer, officially dead of a heart attack thirty six years earlier.

David went still.

Marceau… I have seen that name in the old reports. Not as a suspect. As the man who closed the case.

They kept reading. The diary described an official strongbox moved under the fort after a public collection, donations for restoring the ramparts. The money vanished. The investigation faded. Then a line hit Timothy like cold water: a boy from “Linden Alley” saw too much and was “silenced without being touched.”

David photographed each page.

We leave now. Clean and careful.
And Tony? Timothy asked.
Tomorrow morning. Face to face.

They backed through the tunnel maze. A stone clicked behind them. David killed his light. In the dark they heard a breath, then the soft rasp of plastic. Someone else was down here.

A thin beam swept the corridor, a headlamp worn low. A figure passed, dragging something that chimed faintly, like a chain.

When the footsteps vanished, David whispered

We are not the only ones looking.


At dawn Tony was already outside the garage, sitting on a folding chair. His hands shook.

You found it, he said. I can see it on your faces.

Timothy showed him the copied page with Marceau’s name. Tony went pale, then nodded.

I was fifteen. I ran errands for town hall. One night Marceau took me under the fort with two other men. He said it was to keep things safe. I saw the seal. I saw they had opened it.

Tony swallowed.

After that he put a hand on my shoulder and spoke softly, like a kindly uncle. “If you talk, your mother loses her job. You end up in a cell.” No fists. No blood. Just fear.

David leaned closer.

Why tell this now?

Tony looked toward the fort.

Because they are doing it again. Different method, same circle. I heard a name at the café. I decided I will not die with this stuck in my throat.

Timothy finally understood. Tony was not telling a ghost story. He was handing them a confession he had carried for decades.


David returned to the archives quietly. The old reports were full of gaps: missing pages, copied signatures, dates that did not match. Yet one thread remained, a contract for “securing underground passages,” awarded to a company that did not exist.

The listed address now matched a modern public works firm linked to the deputy mayor, a man too respected for anyone to question.

Timothy did what he did best, he listened. Customers talked while their cars were on lifts. One mentioned late night “safety work for tourists.” Another swore he had seen trucks near the fort after midnight. The rumors aligned like gears.

That night they went back, not to dig, but to watch. Hidden near a side access point, they saw the same headlamp. Two men emerged carrying a long heavy bag that clinked like metal. A third waited by a van, coat spotless, shoes clean, the kind of clean that did not belong underground.

David started recording. The man turned and the light caught his face.

The deputy mayor.

David exhaled.

We have our man. Now we need proof and the link to Marceau.


The diary provided it. The last page, nearly erased, held a crude map and a seal code. David compared it to an old municipal finance register.

Same code. Same year. Same note: “rampart restoration fund.”

The missing money had an identity again. And the diary hinted at more than theft: a second cache, documents used to pressure people into silence. That explained the phrase “silenced without being touched.” Fear was cheaper than violence.

David built a case outside local influence and sent it to the regional prosecutor. Tony agreed to testify. His voice cracked, but he did not bend. Timothy handed over the footage and the garage whispers that placed trucks and men at the fort.

The arrests came on a gray morning. Investigators searched a municipal storage site and found heirlooms matching the wooden box, items sold off, then quietly repurchased to keep the legend alive. More importantly, they found a sealed archive box packed with letters, forged approvals, and leverage: names, favors, threats written politely.

The treasure was not gold. It was a machine.

Afterward Tony returned to the garage and stood beside Timothy’s workbench, breathing as if learning a new habit.

You know what kept me alive all these years? Tony said. It was not fear.
He looked up, eyes wet but steady.
It was the hope that one day someone would listen and not laugh.

Timothy glanced at the fort, ancient and silent on the hill. They had not only uncovered stolen heirlooms. They had dug up the truth, and the names of the men who tried to bury it.


Thank you very much for reading, it's time to invite my friends @franyeligonzalez, @norat23, @dasudi to participate in this contest.

Best Regards,
@kouba01

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Week-4 : Hidden Truth Unveiled

 
Hello @kouba01, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.85/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation1/1Good
Total9.65/10
FeedbackA nice story which touches almost all prompt points. I understand how Tony felt when he saw things getting repeated and now he had nothing to lose but get peace of mind. You could score better but you crossed word limit.
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