Steemit Challenge s28wk6: Unexpected Chat's True Twist.

Antony usually didn't like crowds in the market. So he didn't go shopping in a shopping mall that much. But that day, Tina stood out in the crowd. She was packing her clothes carefully. Tina worked there, so she had to work there carefully, remembering her responsibilities. Those moments when Tina looked up, it seemed to Antony that Tina was not just looking at the customers, she was looking at her own future.
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Antony didn't say anything because he knew that expressing some feelings on the first day would ruin their depth. Antony came back the next day. There was no need, no excuse, just stood in front. After a few seconds of silence, he slowly asked Tina, "Do you work here every day?" Tina was a little surprised, then smiled and answered, "Yes." He was talking in a normal manner. Usually, during work, the shopping mall is busy, people come and go, but Antony found a kind of strength in those simple words. As if he didn't feel tired even after talking to someone for a long time.

Antony said in his mind, avoiding the fear, if you don't mind, I can have coffee with you one day. Tina thought for a while and nodded her head in agreement. But she said that she could eat after work. After work, they sat in a small cafe on the side of the road. Evening was falling outside, and inside, the extraordinary lighting of the restaurant was revolving around them, as if this romantic moment was revolving around them.

The coffee cup was steaming, the conversation slowly started with work. Then the small stories of life. Tina doesn't talk much, but what she says is deep and from the heart, where there is no wall of deceit. While sipping coffee, Tina said that you are a very calm person. Antony smiled lightly, and said that I am actually a person and I don't have time to understand both time. There was a kind of warmth in Tina's eyes at that time, looking at those eyes, Antony realized that this conversation was not just about coffee, it was the beginning of something.

In the following weeks, they started to meet and talk regularly. Each time, the conversation would go a little deeper. Tina said I want to do something myself, I don't want to be stuck in a job. I want to stand on my own. Antony was listening attentively then said that this is quite good. And I am also thinking about a business. It is true that there is fear, but if you don't keep fear aside, you can't start anything. So even if you overcome fear, you have to take a rickshaw to stand on your own identity.

Then they both understood that this relationship is not just about feelings, it is a beginning of courage and sharing their dreams and plans. Because they respect each other's dreams and plans. Within a few days, Tina started her own small business. With her own favorite clothes and her own ideas. Antony also started on her own initiative, planning her own slowly. But they both walked different paths. But sometimes they would come and share their progress stories with each other.

Both of their businesses were progressing in their own way. However, they would share the plans with each other while sitting together. During these times, there was no competition. There was no greed. There was only enthusiasm, no demands, just faith and a kind of addiction to move forward. Antony understood that not all relationships start with promises of the future, some relationships help people reach their own place. They help them expand their dreams and also build strong morale.

And this is how they started to succeed in business and at one point they built their dream house in that city and the two of them started living there. The two of them became each other's life partners for the rest of their lives. And this is how the story ended. Thank you very much to everyone.

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Week-6 : Unexpected Chat's True Twist

 
Hello @boishakhi123, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-6. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria is provided below:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Okay
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10
FeedbackYou have done well but for couple of minor mistakes. For instance the prompt says Antony asked Tina for a cup of coffee in the first meeting but in your story he comes back next day.
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