Hi, @jasminemary

It's a pleasure to see that you've accepted my challenge, welcome! Here is your evaluation:

I'm glad that your father got married and has someone to take care of him when he retires, especially that you, his children, have supported him.

Although you had a very good narrative, you had several details. The first of them is that you did not reach 300 words, which is the minimum allowed. Second point, you did not delve into the message, I thought you would talk about the lesson that this experience left you, but you did not delve into that topic. The photos were good.