RE: The Exquisite Corpse: A Weekly Story Nobody Fully Controls
Right now..? I thought that was a suggestion for something to happen in the future. Why now? You knew that I was feeling tired from rolling all those stones. You know that, and you still asked the question with all seriousness. I could see that on your face. It is just the way that you act, isn't it? You just try to lure others to say things that they try to hide. It is that attitude that you cannot let go off, isn't it? Well, this time is going to be different. We are still going to roll that stone up. But, while we are at it, I need you to tell me what happened when you disappeared for two years. How has it been? I heard rumors that it was not something that you wanted to do. It was a favor to someone dear to you. It is those little things that you try to hide. Well, let us get ready to move and you can start telling me all about it while we are moving.
"Two years?" I muttered, my hands slipping on the wet, mossy granite as the boulder wobbled between us. A sharp gust of sea wind nearly knocked the breath out of me, but I held my ground. "You call it a favor, but back then, it felt more like taking the hit for a fire I didn't start."
I wiped the sweat from my forehead with my forearm and looked him dead in the eye, the heavy stone trembling under our weight. "I stayed away because if I came back any sooner, the whole village would have known whose hands were really on that chest. But since we're finally talking... tell me, Ronnie, did you ever open it while I was gone, or is the rusty padlock still sitting on the bottom of the cove?"
The narrator of this story, a certain @ladyaryastark, saw that the experiment was getting out of hand. Sisyphus was no longer carrying a stone to the top of the mountain only to have it roll back down into the void, but rather a "wet, mossy grain," like river sediment, in his hands. Then he stopped to reflect: Can an absurd life cease to be absurd at a certain point? What is the point of bearing the "weight" of what happens in the world if not even the reflections written by @gor671, so insightful, will be read by the "masters of the world"? Do I become anxious about the present, or do I close my eyes and immerse myself in this narrative where @ronnie asks about the two years I spent in Hades? Does Ronnie not know that the underworld of before is now our world?
Ladyaryastark read what Sol had written, and she was furious to see that this "newcomer" was trying to read her thoughts, then she took control of her "exquisite corpse" and decided that we should return to the moment when Mr. Isbister was on the beach at Pentargen.
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Great. I learned something new today, which is fantastic. I loved this "exquisite corpse" activity. We used to play it all the time in college—though not with narrative texts, but with poetry. Maybe we could try it that way.
You can always write a poem.
To me it feels the storyline was gone. It is unclear to me how many people were present. It feels as if not everyone read all the earlier parts or the translators (most likely) messed it up.
@ladyaryastark managed to pull the writing together, and to my surprise, I loved the final version. Haven't you read it? In fact, I thought it was a perfectly rounded piece where the ending aligned with the...
Thanks to everyone!
We look forward to seeing you at the second edition of this exquisite corpse.
https://steemx.org/hive-107855/@ladyaryastark/the-exquisite-corpse-a-weekly-story-nobody-fully-controls-2-p1m13z
Definitely. I'll be there.
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Sounds there's a 4th character introduced to the story or?
This BOOMING vote is yours and well deserved!
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I wonder who is at word. The Sissy?
This BOOMING vote is yours and well deserved!
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Thank you & have a nice day,
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