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I read it hours ago, but somehow Ingot lost at the piece @ronnie wrote. I do not understand who says what.

Well, the idea is to include digressions too—you know, like in Cortázar's Hopscotch.

It is not about that, but me not understanding who says what...
How come "they" say I am chaotic? I better stay away then..

I don't think you should step away. If there was one thing that defined the Surrealists, it was precisely chaos—and the act of "breaking the mold" that presents life as a mere sequence of actions, when in reality, it is a whirlwind. I hope you view it from this perspective, @wakeupkitty.