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Well, the idea is to include digressions too—you know, like in Cortázar's Hopscotch.

It is not about that, but me not understanding who says what...
How come "they" say I am chaotic? I better stay away then..

I don't think you should step away. If there was one thing that defined the Surrealists, it was precisely chaos—and the act of "breaking the mold" that presents life as a mere sequence of actions, when in reality, it is a whirlwind. I hope you view it from this perspective, @wakeupkitty.