Inner Eye

in Dream Steem2 months ago

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In a high school, a girl named Jihan who is in class 10 of Science 2. She feels strange, because her deskmate has not been here lately and is always absent. Jihan who feels uneasy wants to find out. She is not alone, she invites her 2 best friends, Bagas and Arga. Jihan rarely or even does not have female friends, instead she hangs out with the opposite sex. I don't know why she is being avoided like that.

This afternoon, she told her best friend via message to meet in front of the school at 10 pm. Her best friend agreed even though they felt strange about Jihan.

It's exactly 10 pm now. The three humans are now in front of their gloomy and tense school.
"Is this why we came here at night?" Bagas asked.
"You know, you want to make a test of courage content, right Han?" Arga asked.
"No, we're going to be detectives" Jihan answered, immediately making both of them frown in confusion.
"Huh detective? Not wrong?" Arga asked.
"Okay, just follow me, now let's climb the pager, then we'll go to my class," said Jihan.

There was a lot of debate, they climbed the fence. And finally succeeded. They walked slowly towards Jihan's class. But when they passed the hallway suddenly.

Hihihihihihi
"HEHH! WHAT'S THAT?!" Bagas was shocked.
"Damn it, let's go back, I'm scared, it's really cold" Arga said.
"What the heck! You guys are men! How could you do that and get sluggish? Just go!" Jihan was annoyed.

When they arrived at Jihan's class, Jihan slowly opened the doorknob. And...

"HEHH WHAT'S THAT?! Come on Han, let's go back" Bagas was scared.
"You know Han, I'm going to pee my pants..." Arga said while hiding his gaze behind Bagas' body.

But Jihan ignored them, Jihan actually walked towards the creature that looked like a schoolgirl, with her uniform covered in blood stains while looking down listlessly and sitting next to Jihan's bench.

“Hey Han! Are you crazy?!” Bagas said.
“Come back Han, come back!” Arga continued.

Now Jihan was sitting right in front of the creature. Then Jihan tried to communicate with him.
“I know it’s you..” Jihan said.
“Why are you like this? Can you explain?” Jihan asked.

Thought to answer Jihan's question, the creature actually giggled. And managed to make Bagas and Arga sit weakly.
"Oh my God, I want to go home.." Bagas said.
"Mom Arga is scared, Mom!" Arga said.

Instantly the creature disappeared. And Jihan ran after it.
"You two follow me!" Jihan said as she passed Bagas and Arga.
"Hey Han wait..!!" They said then ran after Jihan.

Jihan stepped towards the rooftop. When she reached the middle of the stairs Jihan stopped.
"Hey, did you two hear me?" Jihan asked.
"Come on Han, don't be afraid, why?" Bagas said.
"Come back Han, I'm really weak, I'm going to faint soon" Arga said.

"Anyway, don't be too afraid! Especially since your minds are blank! Do you want to be possessed?" Jihan asked.
"Of course not! Do you have an inner eye, Han? How can you communicate with that creature?" Bagas asked.
"Did you know what to tell me?" Arga continued.

"I've had it since I was little, so now I want to reveal the case of a friend of mine who went missing for a few days, so I got a clue in a dream that I was told to go to school late at night, later I said I'll find out for myself," said Jihan at length.

Suddenly... Hihihihihihihi The sound of laughter boomed again. Jihan immediately headed towards the rooftop, followed by Bagas and Arga.

Arriving at the rooftop, Jihan found a very surprising sight.
“Edzgar!” The three shouted in surprise. Because the creature was strangling Edzgar.
"Sena... I beg you to let Edzgar go," Jihan asked.

The creature named Sena laughed loudly again, making anyone who heard it want to run away in fear.
"What do you know about me? Don't stop me if you don't want to get hurt!" Sena said while tightening her grip on Edzgar.

Jihan tried to imagine what relationship Edzgar had with Sena.

Now Jihan's body was in the school warehouse. She looked towards the warehouse door, and the two lovebirds, none other than Edzgar and Sena, entered.

"Why did they go to the warehouse after school?" Jihan muttered.

Jihan widened her eyes in disbelief. Edzgar committed his depraved act, which was to harass Sena. Sena threatened Edzgar to report his actions to the police.
Edzgar, who was confused with emotion, now took an unused chair and..

Brakk!!
The chair was smashed repeatedly on Sena's body until he breathed his last.

"Gosh..." Jihan whispered.

Then Jihan saw Sena whose body was put in a small cupboard then Edzgar just left her like that.

Slap!
"Hah hah huh" Jihan's squirm was like she had just finished a marathon. Even though she had been standing there all this time.
"After what you saw, does he deserve to live? He also has to be responsible for what he did!" Sena said then laughed again.
"Enough Sena.. get rid of your grudge, you shouldn't be like this, you should be calm. Let us take care of Edzgar, you go back to your world" Jihan requested.
"Hihihi, to hell with being calm! I won't be calm before he dies by my hands!" Sena replied.

"P-please forgive me, I-I promise I will be responsible" Edzgar whispered.
"It's too late! It's your time to die by my hands!!" Sena said then pushed Edzgar from the rooftop.

Bruukk!!
“Oh my God..” Said Bagas and Arga who were still stunned by the sight in front of them.
“Are you satisfied? Now leave before I force you out!” Jihan was annoyed.

Sena lowered her head.
“Sorry I made the mess that happened, I will leave, I ask for help. Please tell my family or my body is in the warehouse. I will thank you” Sena said then left like a cloud.

“Damn! I failed again!” Jihan was annoyed while holding back her tears. Because she failed to stop Sena from killing Edzgar.
“Come on Jihan, don't blame yourself” Bagas said to calm her down.
“That's right, this is also the law of nature” Arga continued.

The next day, Atmawijaya 02 High School was in an uproar over the discovery of Edzgar who died after falling from the rooftop and the discovery of Sena's body in the warehouse. Now school was dismissed early so as not to become the center of attention.

However, now Jihan, Bagas, and Arga were on the rooftop where Sena's spirit killed Edzgar by dropping him from the rooftop.

Jihan held her best friend's hands and gave a message.
"Remember! Only we know about this incident! Don't let anyone leak it, or the person concerned will be angry. Let the story of Sena and Edzgar be a life lesson for us to always be alert and careful in behaving," said Jihan.

Bagas and Arga nodded in agreement. Then the three of them left the scene.
"Hopefully you two will be calm there ..." Jihan thought.

She had finished revealing the problem of her deskmate's death. Now Jihan prepared herself and so did Bagas and Arga who were like detective assistants. Now they were ready to reveal the problem of the strange deaths in the next cases.

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saya sangat terhibur membaca cerita anda, walau di akhir cerita hati saya lumayan deg-degan. Saya terbawa emosi membacanya. Saya teringat dengan beberapa kasus yang di alami oleh beberapa saudara kita sekarang ini. yang menerima ketidakadilan, seperti alam yang tidak memihak kepadanya. namun sebagai manusia yang beriman, kita harus percaya bahwa semua ini adalah kehendaknya dan kita harus mengambil hikmah dan pelajaran disetiap kejadian. Cerita anda sangat bagus dan memiliki nilai edukasi, sebagai manusia kita harus berjaga-jaga untuk melindungi diri kita, apabila perlu kita perempuan makhluk yang lemah fisik , saya sarankan untuk belajar ilmu bele diri, apabila ada lelaki yang ingin melecehkan kita, kita siap untuk membela diri dengan bekal ilmu bela diri kita. Selain belindung dengan sang pencipta kita kita juga harus memiliki bekal ilmu. Banyak tejadi kasus pelcehan tehadap perempaun yang tanpa perlawanan, dan mereka tewas begitu saja ditangan orng-orang yang tidak memiliki iman dan hati nurani.
saya juga ingin betanya : apakah dalam cerita ini anda menginkan pelaku di dunia nyata seperti di negara kita, mendapatkan perlakuan yangsama seperti edzgar ?

#wewrite