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RE: Crypto Academy Week 5 Homework Post for @gbenga
Hello @mandate, thanks for participating in this week's assignment. I want to call your attention to a few things on your post and the first is styling.
I am sure this (#####Task)is a mistake and will appreciate it if you can correct it.
The two paragraphs in the image above could stand as one paragraph. Also, the choice of words is another hindrance to keeping me keen on your post. Eg, from the paragraph above, using "there is always rapid rise" in the context isn't the right word to use. Using words such as "there is an increase/rise....."

You should reference an event which you weren't present at. You read or saw the story of the hacking somewhere, we will love to know the source(s).


Hello @gbenga, thank you it had been edited and corrected you can take a look at it now