Hi there,

I genuinely enjoyed your stories, particularly when I read them apart from the strings attached to the tasks. It was a pleasure reading them. Really :)

Your depiction of sadness and sacrifice, central to Wilde's story, was beautifully captured. The emotional depth, especially in the ellipsis and metaphor versions, was truly compelling.

I also appreciated your exploration of beauty and ugliness, with the Christian allusion to Lucifer being a standout element.

If I may offer a suggestion: while the ambiguity and ellipsis versions were effective, there could be a bit more balance between evoking emotions and progressing the narrative. At times, the introspection felt a little too prominent, which slightly slowed the story's momentum.

I wish you all the best.

#microwrite05

@joslud and @solperez